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it was ok... you had some good sticks and some good snipes, but leave out spawn killing and over-the-top text within the montage (i.e. RAAAPPPEEEEEE!!!1!!1) Also, I know you didn't do the editing, but it could've been better, too. The music was good to synch to, and you kind of passed that up. I didn't particularly care for the music, but that's just me. I don't really like rap. Finally, it seemed a little dark, but maybe that's just me too.
All in all, I give you a B. Good job.
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