i don't know...first time at something like this

TheBerto · 12-11-2006, 11:08 PM

I created everything but the dragon from scratch. I did it after i got home form work a couple of hours ago...

is it even C&C-able?

*GandalfTheGreat* · 12-11-2006, 11:15 PM

The water looks good!!!

Its got this complete flat feeling to it, but I can see what the theme is and its cool, its just that it's flat. The moon feels too big too

what does C&C mean anyway Comment & Critique maybe?

TheBerto · 12-11-2006, 11:21 PM

it was supposed to be sort of a fantasy look. i was trying to make it not look flat...hehe looks like i failed at that.

fattony69 · 12-12-2006, 04:59 AM

What you needed to do is make the moon and sun smaller and have a focus point so if you don't want to make it flat.

Genoc1de · 12-12-2006, 05:06 AM

good dragon design.
but as they said, its flat, and i dont like the idea of 3 LARGE suns. i have clue what the focal is.

FoLLi · 12-12-2006, 07:19 AM

I think you need to add some blue into the sky cause thats what really is making it flat. Maybe if the sun is setting there should be more blue towards the top of the sky.

Mathiasa · 12-12-2006, 08:08 AM

Focal point?

Bad textures on the sun, and the water looks contrasy.
Bg is really flat.

FoLLi · 12-12-2006, 11:13 AM

You know what try taking a look at sunsets on the ocean that may give you something to go by.

TheBerto · 12-12-2006, 04:39 PM

Really good advice guys. that's what i call C&C! thanks, i'll post a revised one later today or tomarrow

BRaaaaaaaaaaaKe · 12-12-2006, 04:40 PM

that water is awesome

12-11-2006, 11:08 PM	#1 (permalink)
TheBerto GV Pro Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Meadowlands Posts: 999 Iavis	i don't know...first time at something like this - 12-11-2006, 11:08 PM I created everything but the dragon from scratch. I did it after i got home form work a couple of hours ago... is it even C&C-able? __________________

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GandalfTheGreat Cleaned Up Ogre Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Amarillo Tx Posts: 1,494 Little Gandalf	The water looks good!!! Its got this complete flat feeling to it, but I can see what the theme is and its cool, its just that it's flat. The moon feels too big too what does C&C mean anyway Comment & Critique maybe? __________________

12-11-2006, 11:21 PM	#3 (permalink)
TheBerto GV Pro Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Meadowlands Posts: 999 Iavis	it was supposed to be sort of a fantasy look. i was trying to make it not look flat...hehe looks like i failed at that. __________________

12-12-2006, 05:06 AM	#5 (permalink)
Genoc1de GV Regular - Level 9 Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 480	good dragon design. but as they said, its flat, and i dont like the idea of 3 LARGE suns. i have clue what the focal is. __________________ myspace.com/drummerxcore

12-12-2006, 07:19 AM	#6 (permalink)
FoLLi GV Senior - Level 10 Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Buffalo, New York Posts: 602 FoLLY A T M, iAx3i FoLLY	I think you need to add some blue into the sky cause thats what really is making it flat. Maybe if the sun is setting there should be more blue towards the top of the sky. __________________ GT's: FoLLY A T M IAx3I FoLLY

12-12-2006, 08:08 AM	#7 (permalink)
Mathiasa GV Elder Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Internet Posts: 4,564 DeOneAndOnly	Focal point? Bad textures on the sun, and the water looks contrasy. Bg is really flat. __________________ The "Lets Drop It" Thread

12-12-2006, 11:13 AM	#8 (permalink)
FoLLi GV Senior - Level 10 Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Buffalo, New York Posts: 602 FoLLY A T M, iAx3i FoLLY	You know what try taking a look at sunsets on the ocean that may give you something to go by. __________________ GT's: FoLLY A T M IAx3I FoLLY

12-12-2006, 04:39 PM	#9 (permalink)
TheBerto GV Pro Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Meadowlands Posts: 999 Iavis	Really good advice guys. that's what i call C&C! thanks, i'll post a revised one later today or tomarrow __________________

12-12-2006, 04:40 PM	#10 (permalink)
BRaaaaaaaaaaaKe GV Elder Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 1,813	that water is awesome __________________ DaSerg777 (12:43:13 AM): i love u DaSerg777 (12:43:19 AM): will u have sex with me now DaSerg777 (12:43:31 AM): give it to me hard and than soft, and than hard BRaaaaaaaaaaaKe (12:44:28 AM): ummmm weird DaSerg777 (12:44:43 AM): im serious

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