tried harder this time

jacqu3 · 05-05-2007, 03:20 PM

i spent more time on this one and actually tried. but remeber this is only my second attempt so be kind.

*Rubber* · 05-05-2007, 03:31 PM

Something is wierd to me about the sun in the BG of the first. I like the doll tho.

The second isn't too bad for a 1st try too.

jacqu3 · 05-05-2007, 03:41 PM

yea i really didnt know what i did with the lense effect. i hit something and it all went dark and mysterious.

*Rubber* · 05-05-2007, 04:03 PM

Do you use photoshop?

If so check this tut out. Really helpful, for me at least.

jacqu3 · 05-05-2007, 04:07 PM

yea i use photoshop. i will give it a look thanks.

ftw932 · 05-05-2007, 05:04 PM

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Originally Posted by Rubber

Something is wierd to me about the sun in the BG of the first. I like the doll tho.

The second isn't too bad for a 1st try too.

if ur talking about the one with MC than i made that one

Zodiac · 05-05-2007, 05:28 PM

The doll is really cool and I like what you did with the sun. Buuut I think that the yellow outerline of the doll seems out of place. Yellow is like cheerful and its a sad doll with a dark background.

jacqu3 · 05-05-2007, 05:47 PM

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Originally Posted by Zodiac

The doll is really cool and I like what you did with the sun. Buuut I think that the yellow outerline of the doll seems out of place. Yellow is like cheerful and its a sad doll with a dark background.

what is i changed it to outline my name? that is what i had at first then i changed it to around the doll.

ViPeR · 05-05-2007, 05:49 PM

if u hadnt surrounded tha render with whatever that is, used better lighting, and slightly covered tha render itd have been great, try to make those changes and ull be set, u did good for a beginner, reminds of when i first started, filter-clouds-sig

jacqu3 · 05-05-2007, 05:51 PM

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Originally Posted by ViPeR

if u hadnt surrounded tha render with whatever that is, used better lighting, and slightly covered tha render itd have been great, try to make those changes and ull be set, u did good for a beginner, reminds of when i first started, filter-clouds-sig

ok i will give it a try. but i opened it in photoshop and it said index instead of all my layers and stuff so i dont know how to change it.

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jacqu3 GV Senior - Level 10 Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: YO MAMMA HOUSE Posts: 639 TFnX Jacqu3	tried harder this time - 05-05-2007, 03:20 PM i spent more time on this one and actually tried. but remeber this is only my second attempt so be kind. __________________ SHAKANARNAR

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Rubber OMG Get BxRLyRL Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Tig Ole Bittie's Posts: 1,482 RRRRRRRRRRubber	Something is wierd to me about the sun in the BG of the first. I like the doll tho. The second isn't too bad for a 1st try too. __________________

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jacqu3 GV Senior - Level 10 Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: YO MAMMA HOUSE Posts: 639 TFnX Jacqu3	yea i really didnt know what i did with the lense effect. i hit something and it all went dark and mysterious. __________________ SHAKANARNAR

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Rubber OMG Get BxRLyRL Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Tig Ole Bittie's Posts: 1,482 RRRRRRRRRRubber	Do you use photoshop? If so check this tut out. Really helpful, for me at least. __________________

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jacqu3 GV Senior - Level 10 Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: YO MAMMA HOUSE Posts: 639 TFnX Jacqu3	yea i use photoshop. i will give it a look thanks. __________________ SHAKANARNAR

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Zodiac Banned GV Senior - Level 10 Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Massachuetts Posts: 533	The doll is really cool and I like what you did with the sun. Buuut I think that the yellow outerline of the doll seems out of place. Yellow is like cheerful and its a sad doll with a dark background.

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ViPeR Graphics Team Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Fort Lauderdale,FL - Queens,New York Posts: 4,435 H2K ViPeR	if u hadnt surrounded tha render with whatever that is, used better lighting, and slightly covered tha render itd have been great, try to make those changes and ull be set, u did good for a beginner, reminds of when i first started, filter-clouds-sig __________________ post 5000 will be my last

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