First Montage

Stevieo68 · 08-20-2005, 09:42 PM

Hey guys heres my first attempt at a montage, tell me what you think.

http://rapidshare.de/files/4162988/S...ntage.wmv.html

**thehalogod** · 08-21-2005, 12:21 AM

It actually held my attention long enough to finish it, which is indeed impressive heh.

You had really good syncing to the music and some of it was very suttle, I liked that. Overall I'd say pretty good. But this is what I would fix to make it better.

My suggestions:

Fix your size or whatever is the matter. Some clips seemed too far zoomed in like the screen. You couldn't see radar sometiems etc.

Not sure if there were guests, but if so remove those clips.

Don't have any clips where someone is standing still and you no scope em

Don't use the Halo font, (this is up to you, it's just used a lot thats only reason I say it here)

fragger1191 · 08-21-2005, 09:06 AM

I can't download it now ("too many users are downloading.")
Once I can download it, I'll let you know what I think.

SPARTAN002 · 08-22-2005, 09:32 AM

same cant download boohoo ill repost later

KenShi oS · 08-22-2005, 02:36 PM

it was good i like it very much! Need better music though! but that is just me cause i like rap! :P:P

Stevieo68 · 08-22-2005, 09:36 PM

yeah well i dont like rap so dont expect any in my next one

iJosh · 09-11-2005, 03:02 PM

ugh...rapidshare. Well, you'll be my download for this hour. Downloading now...

EDIT: Not bad! Good music, good editing, a little too many easy no-scopes, but all in all a good montage.

Icee · 09-27-2005, 09:25 AM

Not bad I'v seen alot of montages and that was a good for a first and by the way I liked the music I'm a big rock fan

08-20-2005, 09:42 PM	#1 (permalink)
Stevieo68 GV Regular - Level 6 Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Wisconsin Posts: 129 HoC Stevieo	First Montage - 08-20-2005, 09:42 PM Hey guys heres my first attempt at a montage, tell me what you think. http://rapidshare.de/files/4162988/S...ntage.wmv.html __________________ gt- HoC Stevieo <---------add it for anything

08-21-2005, 09:06 AM	#3 (permalink)
fragger1191 GV Regular - Level 9 Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Maryland Posts: 435 Fragger1191	I can't download it now ("too many users are downloading.") Once I can download it, I'll let you know what I think. __________________ GTs: Fragger1191 or FyA Headshot

08-22-2005, 09:32 AM	#4 (permalink)
SPARTAN002 GV Regular - Level 6 Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Oviedo, FL Posts: 145	same cant download boohoo ill repost later __________________ Halo 2 stats XBL Gamertag: SPARTAN 002

08-22-2005, 02:36 PM	#5 (permalink)
KenShi oS Wannabe Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 4	- 08-22-2005, 02:36 PM it was good i like it very much! Need better music though! but that is just me cause i like rap! :P:P __________________ My First Montage~ Here PLease tell me what you thought here Last edited by KenShi oS : 08-22-2005 at 04:56 PM.

08-22-2005, 09:36 PM	#6 (permalink)
Stevieo68 GV Regular - Level 6 Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Wisconsin Posts: 129 HoC Stevieo	yeah well i dont like rap so dont expect any in my next one __________________ gt- HoC Stevieo <---------add it for anything

08-21-2005, 12:21 AM	#2 (permalink)
thehalogod Administrator Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: WA Posts: 1,039 thehalogod	It actually held my attention long enough to finish it, which is indeed impressive heh. You had really good syncing to the music and some of it was very suttle, I liked that. Overall I'd say pretty good. But this is what I would fix to make it better. My suggestions: Fix your size or whatever is the matter. Some clips seemed too far zoomed in like the screen. You couldn't see radar sometiems etc. Not sure if there were guests, but if so remove those clips. Don't have any clips where someone is standing still and you no scope em Don't use the Halo font, (this is up to you, it's just used a lot thats only reason I say it here)

09-11-2005, 03:02 PM	#7 (permalink)
iJosh Noob - Level 1 Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: The Show-Me-State Posts: 22	ugh...rapidshare. Well, you'll be my download for this hour. Downloading now... EDIT: Not bad! Good music, good editing, a little too many easy no-scopes, but all in all a good montage. Last edited by iJosh : 09-11-2005 at 03:12 PM. Reason: I didn't want to clutter up the board, and there's no one after the post i'm editing

09-27-2005, 09:25 AM	#8 (permalink)
Icee GV Regular - Level 8 Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Ohio Posts: 317 O ICEBOY O	Not bad I'v seen alot of montages and that was a good for a first and by the way I liked the music I'm a big rock fan __________________

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