Ryan 105 montage#2

Ryan 105 · 03-19-2006, 05:39 AM

this is my second montage leave feedback

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PhaLanX · 03-19-2006, 09:16 AM

That was a very good montage, simple and sweet. I loved the music. Generally using the soundtrack music is a no-no... but it was fine there.

+/-

+ Gameplay, you could tell a lot of it was actual skill and not complete luck. Lots of nice BxRs, snipes, sticks etc... good variety
+ MUlti kills, lots of good variety between triples and killtacs etc. Granted there were a lot of stolen/clean up kills, but i dont mind that. Its part of the game.
+ Music, music as good... tansition between songs was amazing, it flowed VERY well.
+ Simplicity, you didnt go all out with effects which was nice
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- quality, im assuming you were usingsomething like a Dazzle DVC 90 for this, so there wasnt a whole lot you could do about the quality. It was just a tad bit hard to see sometimes.
- effects, you had like 1 or 2 effects in there that seemed relatively random and didnt work too good
- a few clips couldve been edited better towards the end of the clip... like not showing you throw the next nade etc.. but that will come with practice.

Overall: The only thing I'd really say to work on would be refining your editing skills. Maybe seeing if there was anything you could do about the quality. But thats about it... keep up the good work. I want to see more from you

Tv x GriM · 03-19-2006, 09:23 AM

wow, really good!
transition in the song was barely hearable that was sweet!
some rape multis,sticks and no-scopes!
overall a sick montage!(better than shooK's new one!)

Verity Farseer · 03-19-2006, 09:54 AM

the music transitions were realy good, but not exactly the easiest music to sync to.the gameplay was awesome, but that first triplle that starts with a bxr wasnt necissary.

ABUSEDGOAT · 03-19-2006, 10:33 AM

+ / - format

+ some rape multis, I really liked a few triples you had in there
+ far sticks
+ some rape no scopes
+ solid BR
+ reasonable quality
+ nice song transition

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- no editing that I could tell other than slow mo, which definitely wasn't needed in a single kill clip on midship
- a few meh kills and sticks in there
- (not a huge one)... after you got the killtac on midship and missed the frenzy I literally said out loud 'oh come on!' .. LOL

Good job, one of the best montages out there with virtually no editing. The gameplay carried it. I agree with someone else too... this montage that has no editing > shooks newest.

Ryan 105 · 03-19-2006, 06:24 PM

hey guys thanks for the good replies.

i didnt really have alot to work with i used movie maker to edit but i am trying to get a better program.

guys send me a F/R Ryan 105

ll dark dragoon ll · 03-19-2006, 07:56 PM

hey ryan do you remember me dude is a very cool montage i think a cool music

and good kills

*GandalfTheGreat* · 03-22-2006, 08:28 PM

I liked it. 8 outta 10 for me.

Aren't you the same guy that made that farewell montage with Pirates of the Caribean music?

03-19-2006, 05:39 AM	#1 (permalink)
Ryan 105 Wannabe Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Halifax, Canada Posts: 5 Ryan 105. PKM Ryan.	Ryan 105 montage#2 - 03-19-2006, 05:39 AM this is my second montage leave feedback http://hostmymontage.com/index.php?dlid=74=faster or http://files.filefront.com/Ryan_105_.../fileinfo.html

03-19-2006, 09:16 AM	#2 (permalink)
PhaLanX 1337 H4Xz0r!!! Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 5,525	That was a very good montage, simple and sweet. I loved the music. Generally using the soundtrack music is a no-no... but it was fine there. +/- + Gameplay, you could tell a lot of it was actual skill and not complete luck. Lots of nice BxRs, snipes, sticks etc... good variety + MUlti kills, lots of good variety between triples and killtacs etc. Granted there were a lot of stolen/clean up kills, but i dont mind that. Its part of the game. + Music, music as good... tansition between songs was amazing, it flowed VERY well. + Simplicity, you didnt go all out with effects which was nice ------------------------------------------------------------------- - quality, im assuming you were usingsomething like a Dazzle DVC 90 for this, so there wasnt a whole lot you could do about the quality. It was just a tad bit hard to see sometimes. - effects, you had like 1 or 2 effects in there that seemed relatively random and didnt work too good - a few clips couldve been edited better towards the end of the clip... like not showing you throw the next nade etc.. but that will come with practice. Overall: The only thing I'd really say to work on would be refining your editing skills. Maybe seeing if there was anything you could do about the quality. But thats about it... keep up the good work. I want to see more from you __________________ _________________________________ _________________________________

03-19-2006, 09:23 AM	#3 (permalink)
Tv x GriM GV Elder Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: in your mum. Posts: 2,378 ITNE JordaNo	wow, really good! transition in the song was barely hearable that was sweet! some rape multis,sticks and no-scopes! overall a sick montage!(better than shooK's new one!) __________________

03-19-2006, 09:54 AM	#4 (permalink)
Verity Farseer Moderator Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Washington Posts: 3,665 Bunzosteele	the music transitions were realy good, but not exactly the easiest music to sync to.the gameplay was awesome, but that first triplle that starts with a bxr wasnt necissary. __________________

03-19-2006, 07:56 PM	#7 (permalink)
ll dark dragoon ll GV Regular - Level 9 Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 381	good montage - 03-19-2006, 07:56 PM hey ryan do you remember me dude is a very cool montage i think a cool music and good kills __________________ http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/5...tfan1wj3tn.gif

03-19-2006, 10:33 AM	#5 (permalink)
ABUSEDGOAT Vidz Review Team Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,692	+ / - format + some rape multis, I really liked a few triples you had in there + far sticks + some rape no scopes + solid BR + reasonable quality + nice song transition =========== - no editing that I could tell other than slow mo, which definitely wasn't needed in a single kill clip on midship - a few meh kills and sticks in there - (not a huge one)... after you got the killtac on midship and missed the frenzy I literally said out loud 'oh come on!' .. LOL Good job, one of the best montages out there with virtually no editing. The gameplay carried it. I agree with someone else too... this montage that has no editing > shooks newest.

03-19-2006, 06:24 PM	#6 (permalink)
Ryan 105 Wannabe Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Halifax, Canada Posts: 5 Ryan 105. PKM Ryan.	hey guys thanks for the good replies. i didnt really have alot to work with i used movie maker to edit but i am trying to get a better program. guys send me a F/R Ryan 105

03-22-2006, 08:28 PM	#8 (permalink)
GandalfTheGreat Cleaned Up Ogre Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Amarillo Tx Posts: 1,492 GandalfTheGreat	I liked it. 8 outta 10 for me. Aren't you the same guy that made that farewell montage with Pirates of the Caribean music? __________________

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