My first montage

H4l Imortal · 04-28-2006, 10:07 AM

hey everyone this is my first montage so tell me what you think. Tell me if you think it can be hosted and if not why. Its my first montage so cut me some slack my second is bound to be much better as i kind of rushed this just to get it out as its me first. www.lordsam.halo4life.co.uk/IMORTALM1H2.WMV

SpaCmaYNe · 04-28-2006, 10:52 AM

Everybody download this and tell Imortal what you hink of it. I personally think it rapes and i know how hard he has been working on this, so lets hear it, whaddya think?

Kombat Frank · 04-28-2006, 10:57 AM

i think its taking way to long to download...compress

H4l Imortal · 04-28-2006, 11:01 AM

UK host...im sorry but still download it, thx

ABUSEDGOAT · 04-28-2006, 11:28 AM

+ / - format

+ some nice sticks... far ones and a few bouncers
+ some nice snipe clips too... some triples were good
+ frenzy in there
+ the smallest bit of editing
+ maybe a good BR, couldn't tell

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- no need for fast forward in all those clips... show the gameplay
- not really necessary to make the screen like that in the frenzy... didn't make it any better or more dramatic
- until the credits, the only maps you had were lockout and midship
- I think anyone that uses FFA snipes needs to have insane clips to use it as it's so easy to get rape clips in it

Overall it was a great first montage. I'd get bigger multis if you wanna keep using FFA snipes on lockout. Also, when you are using effects make sure it's actually making the clip better. Finally, don't speed up your BR clips unless all your kills are like 8 shots. Also, I don't remember seeing any no scopes in there.

H4l Imortal · 04-28-2006, 11:38 AM

ok thx man some advice for my second montage there :P

Halo Disciple · 04-28-2006, 12:47 PM

I thought it was pretty good 6.5-10. I liked the music and thier was some good sincing. I also like the stick on the banshee at the end that was cool.

Pantera House · 04-28-2006, 01:01 PM

its loading...slowly hah

Global kid · 04-28-2006, 01:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Halo Disciple

I thought it was pretty good 6.5-10. I liked the music and thier was some good sincing. I also like the stick on the banshee at the end that was cool.

wow you have potential and you're working you hardest ..so keep up the good work and dont let that talent slip past you without you noticing it.

H4l Imortal · 04-28-2006, 01:07 PM

thx for the feedback keep it coming if you can so i know what to do in my second montage.

04-28-2006, 10:07 AM	#1 (permalink)
H4l Imortal Noob - Level 1 Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: england Posts: 18 oO Imortal Oo	My first montage - 04-28-2006, 10:07 AM hey everyone this is my first montage so tell me what you think. Tell me if you think it can be hosted and if not why. Its my first montage so cut me some slack my second is bound to be much better as i kind of rushed this just to get it out as its me first. www.lordsam.halo4life.co.uk/IMORTALM1H2.WMV

04-28-2006, 10:57 AM	#3 (permalink)
Kombat Frank Vidz Team Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 10,210 Wii Online Code: J3WS-G3T-GASS3D Box Yo Face	i think its taking way to long to download...compress __________________ "highscool's such a serious thing these problems matter"

04-28-2006, 11:01 AM	#4 (permalink)
H4l Imortal Noob - Level 1 Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: england Posts: 18 oO Imortal Oo	UK host...im sorry but still download it, thx Last edited by H4l Imortal : 04-28-2006 at 11:28 AM.

04-28-2006, 12:47 PM	#7 (permalink)
Halo Disciple GV Member - Level 5 Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 86	I thought it was pretty good 6.5-10. I liked the music and thier was some good sincing. I also like the stick on the banshee at the end that was cool. __________________

04-28-2006, 01:01 PM	#8 (permalink)
Pantera House GV Elder Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Ont, Canada Posts: 2,913 PANTERA HOUSE	its loading...slowly hah __________________

04-28-2006, 10:52 AM	#2 (permalink)
SpaCmaYNe Wannabe Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 1	Everybody download this and tell Imortal what you hink of it. I personally think it rapes and i know how hard he has been working on this, so lets hear it, whaddya think?

04-28-2006, 11:28 AM	#5 (permalink)
ABUSEDGOAT Vidz Review Team Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 1,692	+ / - format + some nice sticks... far ones and a few bouncers + some nice snipe clips too... some triples were good + frenzy in there + the smallest bit of editing + maybe a good BR, couldn't tell ============= - no need for fast forward in all those clips... show the gameplay - not really necessary to make the screen like that in the frenzy... didn't make it any better or more dramatic - until the credits, the only maps you had were lockout and midship - I think anyone that uses FFA snipes needs to have insane clips to use it as it's so easy to get rape clips in it Overall it was a great first montage. I'd get bigger multis if you wanna keep using FFA snipes on lockout. Also, when you are using effects make sure it's actually making the clip better. Finally, don't speed up your BR clips unless all your kills are like 8 shots. Also, I don't remember seeing any no scopes in there.

04-28-2006, 11:38 AM	#6 (permalink)
H4l Imortal Noob - Level 1 Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: england Posts: 18 oO Imortal Oo	ok thx man some advice for my second montage there :P

04-28-2006, 01:07 PM	#10 (permalink)
H4l Imortal Noob - Level 1 Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: england Posts: 18 oO Imortal Oo	thx for the feedback keep it coming if you can so i know what to do in my second montage.

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