My way to come back

[Travkid]

Okay everyone my teacher told me that a good way to convince people is too write to them and explain what you want and why you want it. So I typed up an essay to convince my mother why she should let me come back here and hang with you guys. Here it is. Let me know if you think there is something i should add or change. Oh yeah if you have any good threads put the URL so i can put it in my essay and write about it. GamerC511 you need to take off the quote about my mom beating me becasue she's look at the threads.

Travis Duell
September 13, 2006
Gamingvidz essay

There are many reasons why I think I should be able to stay on Gamingvidz. The first reason is that most of us are just a bunch of kids. The second reason is that there are many great forums there. The third reason is even if you won’t let me go to Gamingvidz I still play with all of these guys on XBL(Xbox Live). Gamingvidz is a good website where I have many friends at.
Nearly everyone at Gamingvidz are just teenagers. The oldest person there is Dr. Yuk and he’s thirty. You may believe that people at that site may lie about their age. At GV there is exactly no point in lying about your age. Phalanx started a thread where everyone who is on their regularly gave what their age was.(Put the URL of the thread here) Phalanx even said if you are going to lie about your age don’t post anything. There are a lot of kids who are my age. At Gamingvidz everyone is just a kid.
There are a lot of really good threads at Gamingvidz. (Need a couple of really good Thread URLS)
Even if you don’t let me post anything on Gamingvidz.com I just talk to everyone on that website on XBL. For example, I talk to Phalanx, Treason, Gunna, Frank, Ephrum, da acklete, ieatsnot, B3wKiE, Elmo, Fat Tony, Bonesawwwww, Sorains, Severed, Calvino, Leakysoup, YoungBull, Global Kid, Spaulding007, Jaynz24, FreaK, QsK Icy, QsK King, other QsK guys, DeXtA, Ey3con, An Uber Noob(put anyone else I forgot). All of these guys are my friends and they are all just a bunch of kids. They are all really good people. Everytime I go onto XBL these guys are my friends. None of these guys want me to leave Gamingvidz. They act exactly how my friends at school act except they don’t swear like my friends at school do.

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(quote from stewie griffin- the untold story)
ahhh spot on, spot on

[Severed]

aww. thanks. im glad she let you come back.

[J MAN UNIT]

i think you should say something bout me other than that its perfect i hope it works

[Travkid]

I need some links of good threads and severed she didn't let me come back yet she's gone right now ill finish this at school then give it to her.

[J MAN UNIT]

i cant think of any actual threads but try to find ones that are like big so she sees that alot of the people know each other an talk to eac other.

[SQUIJIT]

Originally Posted by Travkid

Okay everyone my teacher told me that a good way to convince people is too write to them and explain what you want and why you want it. So I typed up an essay to convince my mother why she should let me come back here and hang with you guys. Here it is. Let me know if you think there is something i should add or change. Oh yeah if you have any good threads put the URL so i can put it in my essay and write about it. GamerC511 you need to take off the quote about my mom beating me becasue she's look at the threads.

Travis Duell
September 13, 2006
Gamingvidz essay

There are many reasons why I think I should be able to stay on Gamingvidz. The first reason is that most of us are just a bunch of kids. The second reason is that there are many great forums there. The third reason is even if you won’t let me go to Gamingvidz I still play with all of these guys on XBL(Xbox Live). Gamingvidz is a good website where I have many friends at.
Nearly everyone at Gamingvidz are just teenagers. The oldest person there is Dr. Yuk and he’s thirty. You may believe that people at that site may lie about their age. At GV there is exactly no point in lying about your age. Phalanx started a thread where everyone who is on their regularly gave what their age was.(Put the URL of the thread here) Phalanx even said if you are going to lie about your age don’t post anything. There are a lot of kids who are my age. At Gamingvidz everyone is just a kid.
There are a lot of really good threads at Gamingvidz. (Need a couple of really good Thread URLS)
Even if you don’t let me post anything on Gamingvidz.com I just talk to everyone on that website on XBL. For example, I talk to Phalanx, Treason, Gunna, Frank, Ephrum, da acklete, ieatsnot, B3wKiE, Elmo, Fat Tony, Bonesawwwww, Sorains, Severed, Calvino, Leakysoup, YoungBull, Global Kid, Spaulding007, Jaynz24, FreaK, QsK Icy, QsK King, other QsK guys, DeXtA, Ey3con, An Uber Noob(put anyone else I forgot). All of these guys are my friends and they are all just a bunch of kids. They are all really good people. Everytime I go onto XBL these guys are my friends. None of these guys want me to leave Gamingvidz. They act exactly how my friends at school act except they don’t swear like my friends at school do.

Try and think of a better ending it kinda just ends.. make a conclusion paragraph and an itroductory paragrapgh...

[PhaLanX]

It looks good except: Phalanx, Ephrum, da acklete, Elmo and Bonesawwwww arent 'kids'. We're all at least 20 years old. Many other members, while still younger, are quite mature.

Heres some links to threads for you (all threads started by me):
The 'Whats your age?' thread

Is Double-Shot a necessity - This thread, though I only skimmed through it, promotes great discussion and has minimal spamming/flaming.

Pictures from my trip to Colorado - This is an example of an 'off topic' thread that shows the other kinds of things our users are interested in and discuss.

Ok, so anyone else that has a thread they think could be included, find the URL for it. Post the URL along with a short description of why you think its a good thread.

[J MAN UNIT]

Originally Posted by shake

maybe show the member pics thread? i mean... that at least shows that we aren't 49 year old pedofiles

you mean you guys arent?

[PhaLanX]

Originally Posted by shake

maybe show the member pics thread? i mean... that at least shows that we aren't 49 year old pedofiles

The only thing I'd be afraid of with that one is some of the comments that are made in it. While realistically, they arent that bad because almost all are in jest. To the mother of a 12 year old boy, they would seem very inappropriate.